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Work in Progress November 2021 Flower Challenge WIP - Roses and Cards
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    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9
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    This is what I have so far for the November flower challenge. I didn't make the logo in Inkscape, I downloaded it from this site. It's the first time I draw roses and I'm not convinced with the result, but well, I'm trying 😄

  2. #2
    Pacer Pacer @pacer🏁

    @mrks9 Your composition is interesting, it reminds me somewhat of Alice in Wonderland (Queen of Hearts). What would you like to improve about your image, maybe I can help?

    Post the Inkscape svg and I'll take a look. :)

  3. #3
    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9
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    @pacer Actually the first idea was a skull with to the roses and poker cards, but I have not been able to integrate it. Let me clean up the svg file a bit, it's a mess, and share it 😁

  4. #4
    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9

    @pacer I can't upload the svg file because of lack of space, is there any other way to share it? 🤔

  5. #5
    Pacer Pacer @pacer🏁

    OK, I'll see what can be done regarding the quota.

    I am going to change the title of this thread to avoid confusion for other members of the forum.

    I'll see what can be done with this graphic, though, in the future, you might want to try composing your graphic on paper first, I find that helps me a lot. :)

  6. #6
    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9

    Thank you. Yes, the ideal is paper first, but I don't know how to draw, that's why I like Inkscape so much, it allows me to transfer some ideas that I can't capture in any other way.

  7. #7
    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9
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    Thank you for extending the megabytes. Here is the svg.

  8. #8
    Pacer Pacer @pacer🏁

    @mrks9 What would you like to change about this image? I will see if I can help.

  9. #9
    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9
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    I was just looking for suggestions. In fact, since the initial plan didn't go the way I wanted it to, I've been looking for a second idea. And now I'm not sure which one to go with 😄 Sorry for the mistakes. I use a translator

    Idea Vinilo001
  10. #10
    Pacer Pacer @pacer🏁

    @mrks9 Your artwork is good. The following suggestions might offer some further direction.

    I would recommend you to focus on concept and composition. Think about what you want the viewer to think, feel and focus on.
    In one of your reference images (in the first svg file), the skull appears to be the main graphic with roses and cards used as props.

    Also, you aren't far off with the roses, but I would spend a little longer working on the petals.

    Lighting: The stems are lit from the top. This should, ideally, apply to the petals.

  11. #11
    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9

    Thank you so much for the feedback. I don't have much idea about shading and I make a lot of mistakes.

  12. #12
    Pacer Pacer @pacer🏁

    @mrks9 Shading is fairly simple, but takes a little practice to master. It is good that you know your weaknesses, but don't let them defeat you. I strongly suggest following a pencil drawing tutorial on shading (today if you have time). Pencil drawing skills are not lost, as they transfer easily to digital art. I suggest using a pencil for practise, as it easier to understand drawing concepts when you have the flexibility of pencil on paper. 'Digital shading' is more tricky (especially 'vector shading'), but once you have understood the concept (which I expect you will learn quickly), you will find ways to achieve it in Inkscape.

    You implied that you are not fluent in English, so I won't send a link to a video, but drawing is ubiquitous, so I'm sure you will find good tutorials in you native language.

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    Marcos González Marcos González @mrks9

    @pacer Thank you again. What I usually do to get an idea of how light works is to use Blender in a very basic way. This helps me a bit.

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